Thursday, December 18, 2008

Posts of Blog rachanakar

Posts of Blog rachanakar

mahavir sharma kee dvijendr dvij ke gazal sangrah – jan gan man par tippani :

Posted: 17 Dec 2008 09:52 PM PST

kanpyootar ke monitar par kursi men baithe baithe poora sangrah padhate hue kitana aanand aata hai, isaka andaza nahin lagaya ja sakata jahan pannon ko palatane kee bhi zaroorat nahin…

aaj 'rachanakara' par 'dvija' saheb kee gazalon ka sankalan 'jan-gann-mana' aur 'jahir kureshi' kee qalam se bhoomika padhakar aanand aa gaya. hindi-gazal ke bare men janakari di hai, vastav men sarahaniy hai.
isamen atishayokti nahin hogi ki dushyant kumar ke bad dvijendr 'dvija' hi vah shakhas hai jo hindi- gazal kee pragati men hi nahin balki gazal ko samanti yug ke hijr-visal, shama-paravana aadi pratimanon ke simit dayare se nikal kar nayapan dene men 'dvija' saheb ka bahut bada yog hai.

kanpyootar ke monitar par kursi men baithe baithe poora sangrah padhate hue kitana aanand aata hai, isaka andaza nahin lagaya ja sakata jahan pannon ko palatane kee bhi zaroorat nahin.

mahavir sharma kee poori tippani yahan padhen

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dvijendr 'dvij' ka gazal sangrah rachanakar par aonalain yahan padhen

tatha isakee pidief eebuk yahan se padhen ya daunaloda karen

naval kishor kumar kee do kavitaen

Posted: 17 Dec 2008 08:28 PM PST

majadoora

har roj ushakal se pahale,

jab sooraj poore rat kee nidra ke bad,

apane dayit‍v ka nirvah karane,

nikal padata hai apane chir parichit rah,

thik usi samay vah bechara bhi,

ghutanon tak dhoti lapete,

aur apane angochhe thandh ko chunauti dete,

nikal padata hai apani rah.

usake jane pahachane rah par,

khagavrin‍d usaka s‍vagat karate hain,

aur usake anugami hone kee ghoshana karate hain,

ganv kee tang galiyon men kut‍te,

ajanabi samajh use katane ko daudate hain,

lekin apana sa gandh pakar,

ve dum hilane lagate hain.

sooraj kee kiranon ke sath,

vah bechara pahunch jata hai us thaur,

jahan bikate hain majadoor kaudi ke bhav,

aur soot pahane babuon kee bhid,

kharid lete hain use din bhar ke lie,

vah bechara aadami se majadoor ban,

mook janavar sa usake pichhe chalane lagata hai.

dinabhar kee chakari ke bad,

jab usakee had‌diyan karahane lagati hain,

vah lautane lagata hai vapas apane ghar,

fir milate hain vahin kut‍te,

lekin ab ve nahin bhaunkate,

k‍yonki ab vah akela nahin,

biraha kee tan chadhaye,

bhookhi aavaj se s‍vayan ko bahalane lagata hai.

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uparavale tera koee nam nahin leta

charon taraf bikhare pade hain sajiv lashon ke avashesh,

koee murda in tukadon ko uthane ka nam nahin leta.

jakh‍mon se anavarat ris raha khoon kee dhar ab tak,

dard itana hai ki badan sisakane ka nam nahin leta.

nasoor ban chuke jakh‍mon ko kab tak ham sahejate rahen,

koee apana bhi maraham lagane ka nam nahin leta.

suna hai is das‍t men kabhi ek shahar huaa karata tha,

aalam yah hai ki koee us bas‍ti nam nahin leta.

koee gam nahin dilon men ki ham k‍yon kafir ho gaye,

hamare shahar men ab upar vale, tera koee nam nahin leta.

majahab kee aad le chalate hain ve pith par goliyan,

un‍hen k‍ya maloom ki marane ke bad unaka koee nam nahin leta.

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naval kishor kumar,

braham‍pur, fulavarisharif, patana-801505

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chitr : sabhar - banavasi sammelan, bhopala

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